Sunday, July 14, 2013

Haiku challenge, day 13 & 14

Day 13:
seed:
I am
A hole in a flute
That the Christ's breath moves through –
Listen to this
Music 
~Hazif

My haiku:
"Christ" and "Messiah"
Just mean, "anointed with oil"
mechanics are christs

Alternate:
There exists a flute.
you only have to believe
and you can be saved

Day 14:

seed:
""It doesn't interest me 
what you do for a living.
I want to know
what you ache for
& if you dare to dream
of meeting
your heart's longing." ~Oriah Mountain Dreamer

My haiku:
The mountain dreamer
says something interesting
but no one listens

Alternate:
The secret remains
performing your heart's desire
As a way of life

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